I think your idea is a good one because it is basically the only way to make the environment of music festivals safer since there is no way to eradicate drug use. However, in the case of an elevator pitch, I think the "imagine this" method of a hook is not ideal. I think the elevator pitch would be more effective if you gave a brief background on the environment of music festivals and the drug use there, emphasizing the negative effects and overdoses, so the audience understands why this is important.
I think this was a great idea and I thought you did a very good job of memorizing your elevator pitch. Some constructive criticism I would give is that you clap your hands a couple of times which isn't a huge deal but it does provide unnecessary noise and made me started focusing on that a little more than I should. Overall I thought your presentation was very well put and well thought out great job.
You did very good job explaining your pitch of the Music Festival. However, some things you could change would be more focus on the audience while presenting your speech rather than moving too much in the presentation. Overall, excellent job on your presentation.
very good job presenting, i am all for increasing the safety of festival goers since drug use is so pervasive in these kinds of environments. As far as the actual presentation goes i would suggest maybe not moving as much since this can be distracting and take away from the actual content you are presenting. Great job though!
Great job presenting. I like that you were well dressed and were up and moving. I also like the fact that you acknowledged that it was a work in progress and were not talking the idea up too much. I agree that this could be a life saving service. Great job!
Hi Duc, Good job presenting. I think that you have a good idea here that could make music festivals safer for those attending. Throughout your presentation I think you did a good job; however, I think that you were shifting your weight too much and making small steps that you did not need to because the camera was your only audience in this situation.
Howdy Duc, Your pitch was great, you started with your hook immediately and kept the audience engaged throughout the rest of the pitch. Your posture was also great, you seemed approachable and knowledgeable at the same time allowing the audience to feel comfortable with you and your service. My only advice is to tone down the clapping hand gestures as it was a little bit distracting but other than those two claps you maintained great body language throughout and appeared confident. Great work Duc.
I think your idea is a good one because it is basically the only way to make the environment of music festivals safer since there is no way to eradicate drug use. However, in the case of an elevator pitch, I think the "imagine this" method of a hook is not ideal. I think the elevator pitch would be more effective if you gave a brief background on the environment of music festivals and the drug use there, emphasizing the negative effects and overdoses, so the audience understands why this is important.
ReplyDeleteI think this was a great idea and I thought you did a very good job of memorizing your elevator pitch. Some constructive criticism I would give is that you clap your hands a couple of times which isn't a huge deal but it does provide unnecessary noise and made me started focusing on that a little more than I should. Overall I thought your presentation was very well put and well thought out great job.
ReplyDeleteYou did very good job explaining your pitch of the Music Festival. However, some things you could change would be more focus on the audience while presenting your speech rather than moving too much in the presentation. Overall, excellent job on your presentation.
ReplyDeletevery good job presenting, i am all for increasing the safety of festival goers since drug use is so pervasive in these kinds of environments. As far as the actual presentation goes i would suggest maybe not moving as much since this can be distracting and take away from the actual content you are presenting. Great job though!
ReplyDeleteGreat job presenting. I like that you were well dressed and were up and moving. I also like the fact that you acknowledged that it was a work in progress and were not talking the idea up too much. I agree that this could be a life saving service. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Duc,
ReplyDeleteGood job presenting. I think that you have a good idea here that could make music festivals safer for those attending. Throughout your presentation I think you did a good job; however, I think that you were shifting your weight too much and making small steps that you did not need to because the camera was your only audience in this situation.
Howdy Duc,
ReplyDeleteYour pitch was great, you started with your hook immediately and kept the audience engaged throughout the rest of the pitch. Your posture was also great, you seemed approachable and knowledgeable at the same time allowing the audience to feel comfortable with you and your service. My only advice is to tone down the clapping hand gestures as it was a little bit distracting but other than those two claps you maintained great body language throughout and appeared confident. Great work Duc.